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Yay updates, skimmed a little bit, looking good. Hope
you don’t mind suggestions here.

“Your new horse will have a random number of points earned from showing. Those will be very important as you begin to play! (See How Do Shows Work section)”

Perhaps find some way to clarify/sneak in a blurb about the 20000 point cutoff here? Here’s my stab at it.

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To help you get started your new horses will be created with random amounts of show points. These points contribute to your daily pay & can be increased over the life of your horses (See How Do Shows Work section.) This beginner benefit turns off once you own 20000 points between all your horses, do not be alarmed.

Some proofreading/formatting nitpicks:

Why does it say my account is associated with someone elses accout?
•Typo in the second (account)

When will my horses age up?
•Empty bullets for (b)(c) and (d) showing.

Public and Private sales
•Empty bullet for (d) showing.

Overall, the section headers are quite inconsistent. Some areas are formatted like this:
• 1 Words
• 2 More Words

While others are formatted like this
• Words
• More Words

If this was a stylistic choice for those areas disregard, but to me the #’s seem superfluous.

Callisto, most of that stuff is my way of dealing with the editor! The numbers are because it sometimes puts things in the wrong order, and poor Ammit has to re-order them manually! :D They will go away as I get things organized and arranged to my (and Ammits) liking! :) Although I do have a feeling that this is a project that may NEVER have a distinct ending point! :P


Paradise, I will have to ask Ammit about that! That section was the one that I was most worried about, since I don't go for the fantasy genes, so I don't pay as much attention as I should!

Thanks, you guys!

Changed it!